Communication refinement that keeps your intention intact.
Improve a draft for clarity, structure, tone, and persuasion without changing what you meant. The original text and your stated intention stay visible the entire time.
- Draft and intention capture
- Intent-preserving refinement
- Ambiguity findings
- Audience alternatives
- Change explanations
- Grounding checks
Refinement · Harbour proposal
Original
Kept visible“I wanted to check whether we can still move the phase-two start. I know we discussed the pilot, but I think the timeline might be tight.”
Stated intention
Ask for a decision without sounding defensive.
Refined · for review
Variant 1/2“Could we confirm whether phase two can start after the pilot review? That would keep the timeline tied to the outcome we agreed on.”
- Meaning preserved; the request made explicit.
- “Might be tight” replaced with a concrete decision point.
Evidence · Pilot review notes [1]
Awaiting approval